Dev Update #338
Personnal Life.
My father is now back from the hospital. I still have to take care of a few things around his house while he heals, but I won't go visit him in the hospital every afternoon anymore. That means I can return to an almost normal schedule and work more consistently.
Rewriting.
I got a bit carried away while working on the second draft of Day 2 Scene 5. I finally retouched the whole thing and expanded it a bit. It's now in a state that I'm happy with.
The structure of the scene is now pretty much reversed, and it feels a bit more logical. The interactions between the characters also make way more sense, and Jack no longer sounds like a jerk.
I'm kind of baffled by the amount of information I managed to put into these early scenes despite their very limited amount of words. Of course, it was at the detriment of the emotions, and it lacked finesse, but the truth is that, rewriting these scenes, I'm now struggling to essentially say the same thing without multiplying the word count several times. I'm kind of learning self-control. That might be useful.
Anyway, the second draft is good enough to progress further. I began cutting the scene and preparing it for posing. I don't have a definitive count yet, but the scene is about 4000 words, so it will probably need something like 130 to 135 shots to illustrate it. Posing should be fairly simple, and I don't expect much difficulty, but hey, these things always manage to surprise me.
The soundtrack.
Track 4 is pretty much ready. There are a couple of ideas I want to explore before I close that task, but it's essentially complete.
Next week will be dedicated to posing Day 2 Scene 5. I will probably need about three weeks to pose everything I need. I'll get to it on Monday.
The quick sum up.
- V0.6.7r will contain 2 reworked scenes: Day 2 Scene 4 and Day 2 Scene 5.
- Day 2 Scene 4 has been rewritten, posed, and rendered.
- Day 2 Scene 5 has been rewritten.
- 6827 words of reworked content so far.
- 91 shots are planned, 91 are posed, 91 are rendered, 91 are post-processed.
- 3 tracks are ready.
- I'm working on cutting and posing Day 2 Scene 5.
You can follow my progress on this Trello board.
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