Greetings all!
I will add a new update Monday night.
If I had made the factory scene with the superheroines being the sprayer, carrier, mouth plugger... it would've had more impact. I realize now on hindsight. And sometimes the most complex scenes show the least amount of intimate character interaction and it's always a risk - but I got carried away and just kept giving into the details of it :P Ha ha. Part of the creative process you can't avoid sometimes.
The civilian damsels 'recruited' into the horny hive have been the ones who have endured sensory deprivation the most - was my thinking.
In the old days readers just accepted what writers published. Today with creator and reader interaction it kind of becomes a collaboration. But it's a fine line. I'm a little insane and that's what breeds the weird, unexpected aspect of this experience. So, I filter what folks give me feedback on but none of us are quite sure how it will turn out. We just know it will be shiny latex everywhere :P
I think we try to keep things intimate between the main characters no matter what happens and that in itself will keep it arousing and impactful drama-wise. Lessen learned from this chapter so far.
Thank you all very much for supporting this site and especially for taking the time to give your feedback. I take all feedback seriously and try as I can to incorporate all reader's suggestions into the stories.
We will keep collaborating on these crazy whacky stories and putting the poor wholesome heroines into more and more twisted and perverse ordeals.
Thanks so much!
See you Monday night