New and re-edited Chapter 1 for "If you may, will you be?"

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1f8HF_Fisy8Hsu2BRXMTazbzmB8n0LTblALU3NcLw0eo/edit?usp=sharing (chapter 1)

I think I'll always post the 1st chapter as free. So please enjoy!