Entry #6 Part 1 and 2!
This one had a slightly longer dialogue that was full of the usual snarky back and forth between characters, but I chose to truncate it a wee bit as per my previously stated goal of unclogging my pages HAH. I do think there is value in knowing when to say only enough. Though, I'm not sure I'm 100% happy with the end result here.
I'd love to hear people's thoughts on the overall dialogue/style, if there is anything worth mentioning that is ofc. It is defo the one area I wish to I improve on the most before returning to the bigger comic projects once this sequence is over.
To compensate for less dialogue, I put extra time on the art. May be a tad overcooked, but hey... I had some fun. Progress was actually quite smooth, bar the usual redos/polish because I can't help myself. I've attached the oldest wips I have of this one as a funny extra goodie.
I'm building up the courage to tackle the upcoming pages because things only derail further from here into nonsense LMAO
As always, I hope you guys are doing well!
This one had a slightly longer dialogue that was full of the usual snarky back and forth between characters, but I chose to truncate it a wee bit as per my previously stated goal of unclogging my pages HAH. I do think there is value in knowing when to say only enough. Though, I'm not sure I'm 100% happy with the end result here.
I'd love to hear people's thoughts on the overall dialogue/style, if there is anything worth mentioning that is ofc. It is defo the one area I wish to I improve on the most before returning to the bigger comic projects once this sequence is over.
To compensate for less dialogue, I put extra time on the art. May be a tad overcooked, but hey... I had some fun. Progress was actually quite smooth, bar the usual redos/polish because I can't help myself. I've attached the oldest wips I have of this one as a funny extra goodie.
I'm building up the courage to tackle the upcoming pages because things only derail further from here into nonsense LMAO
As always, I hope you guys are doing well!





