Log inEntry #6 Part 1 and 2!
This one had a slightly longer dialogue that was full of the usual snarky back and forth between characters, but I chose to truncate it a wee bit as per my previously stated goal of unclogging my pages HAH. I do think there is value in knowing when to say only enough. Though, I'm not sure I'm 100% happy with the end result here.
I'd love to hear people's thoughts on the overall dialogue/style, if there is anything worth mentioning that is ofc. It is defo the one area I wish to I improve on the most before returning to the bigger comic projects once this sequence is over.
To compensate for less dialogue, I put extra time on the art. May be a tad overcooked, but hey... I had some fun. Progress was actually quite smooth, bar the usual redos/polish because I can't help myself. I've attached the oldest wips I have of this one as a funny extra goodie.
I'm building up the courage to tackle the upcoming pages because things only derail further from here into nonsense LMAO
As always, I hope you guys are doing well!
This one had a slightly longer dialogue that was full of the usual snarky back and forth between characters, but I chose to truncate it a wee bit as per my previously stated goal of unclogging my pages HAH. I do think there is value in knowing when to say only enough. Though, I'm not sure I'm 100% happy with the end result here.
I'd love to hear people's thoughts on the overall dialogue/style, if there is anything worth mentioning that is ofc. It is defo the one area I wish to I improve on the most before returning to the bigger comic projects once this sequence is over.
To compensate for less dialogue, I put extra time on the art. May be a tad overcooked, but hey... I had some fun. Progress was actually quite smooth, bar the usual redos/polish because I can't help myself. I've attached the oldest wips I have of this one as a funny extra goodie.
I'm building up the courage to tackle the upcoming pages because things only derail further from here into nonsense LMAO
As always, I hope you guys are doing well!
I love the chaos of this whole situation, lots of fun. I think your dialog in this sequence is just the right amount, perhaps a bit squished at times but I think that fits well enough. Thank you for taking the time to share your work.
Thank you!
Honestly, that has been a major concern of mine too. I feel like I get so worried about excess negative space I end up with the opposite issue, in that things wind up a tad cramped.
Gotta remember to give things more space to breathe in future works.
I like the way you stylized the dialogue! This page is really fun. I like to imagine this is related to how Gro+ is made hehehe
Haa, that's a good one. I've written quite a handful of notes on this series, how BWUMP connects to GRO and the products themselves...but then again, it's ever-changing, ever-expanding (lol).
I don't quite know if there will be enough page space to explain it all in-universe in a natural way, so I might need to do it in a bonus/epilogue page of sorts.
Thanks!
The mouse is super cute btw
Thanks! I felt really inspired when designing her. Couldn't resist giving her a little bit of screentime due to that (you'll see what I mean by next entry) x3