PANEL 1-4 Finn, Lune and Agnesa make their way towards the other end of the hideout, to a separate room. Before they open the door leading to the room, Finn mentions his sister - the one who has the final say in Lune's recruitment. At the mention of Finn's sister, some gossip ensues, but Agnesa becomes angry (yes, again) when Lune gently mocks Finn's sister. Agnesa's face turns red, and she points her finger at Lune. Agnesa warns Lune about Finn's sister, who seems not as accepting. Finn brushes it off. LUNE: Your SISTER? FINN: We lead together. You can say she's the brains of the group. AGNESA: Lemme guess, she's still too busy reading airship manuals to come out of her room. LUNE: What a way to live... AGNESA: Don't even THINK about being sharky with HER, Lune. She ain't the forgiving type. FINN: Oh, come on.
PANEL 5 Finn knocks on the door. FINN (OFF): She's not a monster. SFX: KNOCK KNOCK
PANEL 6 We're in front of a silhouette of a woman. She is in the foreground, with her face obscured. Behind her, Finn stands in the doorway. FINN: Fay?
PANEL 1 Shot of the outer walls of the city. An electric fence on top of the wall towers over the city. Armed gas mask goons guard the city gates. FINN (OFF): ... Donovan keeps us inside these prison walls. / All of us.
PANEL 2 Lune, from head to shoulders, wide-eyed and terror-stricken, against a swirling void. LUNE: WHAT?! / WE'RE STUCK?!
PANEL 3 Small extreme close-up of Finn, with his finger poking his chin. FINN: Not when we put an end to his tyranny.
PANEL 4 Small extreme close-up of Agnesa, face turned in the opposite direction. AGNESA: Aye, so how about that-
PANEL 5 Lune stands up and frantically grabs Finn by the collar of his coat, pulling him towards her as she gazes into his eyes and pleads. Finn is caught off-guard by this. SFX: GRAB LUNE: PLEASE, let me help! I can FIGHT, I can-
PANEL 6 Small extreme close-up of Finn, eyes turned the other way, smiling. A drop of sweat rolls down his forehead. FINN: For that, you will need to speak to someone first...
PANEL 7 POV shot (from Finn) of Lune leaning onto him, looking up with a pouty face and big eyes, sparkles surrounding her. FINN (OFF): Let me take you - to the one of course!
Enjoy a little more [esoteric magic system] before we introduce a real baddie.
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TRANSCRIPT:
PANEL 1 LUNE: POWER CELLS, huh? FINN: Driven by magic and thunder forces.
PANEL 2 Closeup of a power cell FINN (CONT,, OFF): The core of his every invention, it's what drives his machines, airships...
PANEL 3 Finn impersonating Baron Donovan to Lune, making a creepy gesture with his arm. Lune leans in attentively. FINN (CONT.): And his metal arm. It can even shock you with a single touch...
PANEL 4 Lune (head to waist) turning away with a fake smile, caressing her neck with her hand. LUNE: So... He's kind of a MAGE now?
PANEL 5 Agnesa (sitting beside Lune on the opposite side) gets angry, nothing new under the sun. Her face turns red, and she's about to rip the bandage in between her hands. Lune turns to her with wide eyes. AGNESA: AB-SO-LUTELY NOT! / He will NEVER be like us!
PANEL 6 Finn close-up, kinda in an 'uncomfortably close' kinda way. FINN: Witchcraft is outlawed because he deems power cells the ONLY acceptable magic source.
PANEL 7 Close shot of Lune from head to neck, with an uneasy, wide smile on her face. LUNE: This is all worse than I thought. Better get out of this hellscape while you can...
PANEL 8 Finn standing up, shown from head to thighs, rubbing the back of his head. FINN: Yeah... / There's just one problem. SFX: RUB RUB
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