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After a few more episodes of Roomies I may decide to change it up and mix in some random 5 page side stories from some of my existing comics. I'm going to open this up to suggestions to see what ideas you guys think might be fun. I think I'll put the best ones up for a vote to see what gets made.
For clarity, the reason I originally avoided doing this was because taking fan suggestions puts things under intense time pressure for a monthly release because several weeks are taken up by voting which means making the comic would happen in the last week before release. But I realize now that if I mix it in with the Roomies comic that relieves the time pressure because Roomies episodes can be made while suggestions and voting are happening for future months.
There are a couple of requirements for story ideas:
For clarity, the reason I originally avoided doing this was because taking fan suggestions puts things under intense time pressure for a monthly release because several weeks are taken up by voting which means making the comic would happen in the last week before release. But I realize now that if I mix it in with the Roomies comic that relieves the time pressure because Roomies episodes can be made while suggestions and voting are happening for future months.
There are a couple of requirements for story ideas:
- Suggestions must use primarily existing characters and settings so they can be made quickly. (i.e. Kayla gets gangbanged on a tropical island at spring break is too much new stuff)
- The ideas must be small enough to fit within 5-10 pages. (i.e. Small bonus scenes, not big new storylines).
- Can't have a large effect on storylines. (I'm mostly thinking this format would make sense for bonus scenes and exploring extra povs of past scenes, I don't want these to get in the way of future storylines that will still be created).
- Must stay mostly canon. (I'm going to consider these bonus parts of the stories that did happen in the universe, if stuff happens that doesn't make sense for the story it would need to be within a character's dreams/fantasies).
As an example, I've mentioned before that seeing what Kayla's dreams are like at the end of KSB4 is a good candidate. Another example would be a small scene from EE between Jasmine and her sugar daddy in a non-xmas setting. Stuff like that.
Please add any suggestions in the comments below, or if you want to keep it private you can message it to me using the contact form at artofhawke.com. Please keep the suggestions small, a few sentences to explain the idea and I'll figure out the rest if I like it.
Hi Hawke, Here is my first suggestion. 1) Kayla's wild dream: the story happened between KSB4 Pages 66 and 68. In the original story, we only learned that Kayla fainted because she overly consumed the toy with the slut mode. Then, she woke up and suddenly became a loyalty puppy. Although you mentioned some "side effects" in the text on Page 53, it still has some room to elaborate how and why she became so submissive on Page 68. My suggestion is that Kayla was half-awake on Page 64 and started to dream between Pages 66 and 68. In her dream, there are two Kayla. One is the original Kayla and the other is the dark-side Kayla (dressing like a BDSM queen). The key part of the story is about how the dark-side Kayla trains the original one and deeply breaks her mind into a submissive pet. Maybe, the original Kayla could dress or have a make-up like a puppy/pet in the end as she totally believes that she is a pet. The ending is inspired by the video of Marc Dorcel - Illusions. In the movie, Laure Sainclair was hypnotized and turned into a slave animal in the end. This may make the story more complete and let the audience know more about the process of the submission. You might simply let the story happen in the end of KSB4 (Page 70). If so, it will be a dream that extends what she experienced in the day and the dream further strengthens herself as a pet. In that case, it could be a bridge between KSB4 and KSB5. We may expect that she will turn into a real slut mode in the beginning of KSB5. Does it sound good to you? Thanks!
Sounds interesting, I'll look up the illusions video.
Yes, please check the video. The ending is truly astonishing! It's on my short list of must-see adult movies.
My second suggestion is 2) The Prequel of Halloween House Party: it's a story happened before David and Michelle went to his boss house. The main tune of the story is about how David prepared the Halloween costumes for the party and he tried to tease his fiancée when selecting different outfits. It could happened in a Halloween costume store. The fun/spicy part is that Dave forced Michelle to do some crazy public flashing or sneakily sexed with her in the changing room. You may add a scene to let Dave play a remote control toy with Michelle as well. In addition, the readers may get a bonus to see different outfits (i.e., catsuit/police woman costume/school girl costume/nurse costume) in one story. I think M-Top's suggestion about Halloween House Party (afterparty version) is a great one, too. I love girls dressed up with masks and costumes. I hope to see more girls with role-playing costumes in your future stories. Thank you so much! P.S. There is a drawback of this idea. It may be time-consuming since you need to create a new store environment and some new costumes. Probably, you could use it as a regular episode (a 40-page story) instead if you prefer. Again, thanks for your consideration.
Yea the store is probably too much work for now. I do need to build a sex store environment for some future story ideas that could also work for this, but that probably won't happen for a while.
Hi, I don't know if I get out of what you are asking for, but in Hostile Takeovers, I would have liked to see the "staff queue" waiting for Mrs. Hart's last day as secretary, and her performance in it.
WLO7 suggested this above and I agree it would fit perfectly for this.
Also, in the end, a Ms Reed with some whipping and more anal sex would be perfect for me. By the way the nipple rings supported with balloons has been great
KSB3: Right before the first picture. Tyler and Kayla are still in bed. The scene takes place in the morning after they did go to bed at the end of the comic. Tyler wakes up and Kayla is still asleep. While she’s still asleep he decides to take her anal, because her vagina is still stuffed with the vibrator. He pulls her slip down and starts inserting his penis into her ass. After a few moments, she wakes up. A few minutes later the vibrator also starts his duty.
This is another good candidate for a KSB bonus scene.
Could do some fun stuff with the evil elves comic for the holidays. Maybe the elves feel bad for some of the people on the naughty list, and decide to use the girls to make them feel better. Maybe the guy Jasmine was gold digging comes home from a long day at work to find her tied up waiting for him.
Might be able to figure this out from the voting, but I'll be curious to see if people are interested in EE stuff outside of the holidays. I'll definitely be doing EE stuff at the end of the year though, whether a full comic or a bonus scene.
Another idea, At the end of Instagram workout the camera guy mentions a janitor and some guys he owes money to are coming by. That could be a fun scene, or maybe subscribestar could be a good place for the PPP loan gangbang scene.
Hi, I love this idea. It's brilliant. Women wearing yoga pants/ leggings and compression workout/racerback tanks are super hot for me. I am thinking if you may make a quick follow-up for Instagram Workout, and, as User#689ba21c mentioned, let the janitor and "his friends" play with Clarissa. They may ask her to wear a mask/blindfold (yes, I love masks too) and do a sex workout live streaming (i.e., PXXnhub). Since the janitor owes money to "his friends", he collects the donations from these online daddies and forces her to do whatever these daddies request. Maybe, these guy may uncover/take off Clarissa's mask/blindfold in the end and let all people online know who she is. I guess Clarissa may be a popular internet celebrity and this humiliates her a lot. Thanks for User#689ba21c and ANON who proposed this idea. I appreciate your consideration in advance, Hawke!
Yep, an IW scene is a good idea.