Log in50 on both Moll and on sketches for my subscribers!
There's a lot of Moll pages included here, because I tweaked one of the older pages, so this includes those. Still, I am enjoying myself a lot with Moll.
I think the difficulty I've had with sketches is related to storytelling. I've had a very easy time drawing groups of people, but solo illustrations are tough. For example, this solo one here is by far the weakest. Maybe I'll study composition and color techniques to help tell solo stories... hm.
Let me know if you have any strong opinions on anything I'm doing.
There's a lot of Moll pages included here, because I tweaked one of the older pages, so this includes those. Still, I am enjoying myself a lot with Moll.
I think the difficulty I've had with sketches is related to storytelling. I've had a very easy time drawing groups of people, but solo illustrations are tough. For example, this solo one here is by far the weakest. Maybe I'll study composition and color techniques to help tell solo stories... hm.
Let me know if you have any strong opinions on anything I'm doing.
I don't know how I didn't realize before that male elves would find her equally attractive. Wonder if it was just that or if this guy likes it rough anyway π
As to opinions.. I quite like how Cara looks sitting there. The tan lines do kinda kick it up a notch too. As to Moll, not sure I'm a fan of the possessiveness seemingly out of the blue, but then again I don't need to be for it to be right for the story
Sigh, premature commenting again.. Anyway! The porn side of it is promising. In some respects you kinda seem to be pushing the kink level up a bit compared to before, which I at least don't mind π .
Do you specifically want to tell those solo stories through composition and color? (Is posing part of composition?) It seems like it'd be really hard to tell much of a story with just the character in isolation, but adding something like a background, some accessory, or a line of dialogue makes a big difference. Those sketches of Hunter and Kimmy riding their respective dildos seem to tell a bit more of a story than for example Cara in the solo shot here, though I don't know if there's a meaningful difference for you π€
Sure there's plenty of stories I can tell through poses, but that part I've got a handle on. I figure it'll be invigorating to use something new to set things up a bit.
As to the fetish and possessiveness and stuff, I was hoping it'd feel like she's trying to find a sense of control in a situation she didn't really expect. I might find a way to make that clearer.
I see what you mean.. I think part of it might've been that she's shown some hint of it before (on the balcony when Naqa (iirc) was being too distracted), so it just reads as jealousy rather than trying to regain her ground. That seems difficult to convey super concisely though.
My strong opinion is I am really enjoying you trying new compositions and experimenting. Also, the teeth and ears on Alis are cute unique features and I love the scene with the fluid dynamics of the water splashing. Also, also- the 'Seriously' had me cackling. Also, part 3- one of the cooler concepts with color I've seen (here or elsewhere) is what you did with Scrub Diving. Maybe you could do a color concept based on emotion of a character or scene. For example- bolder lines and redder colors for anger or more pastel soft lined images for peace..... Either way, thanks for keeping the art flowing even when you don't feel great about it. I love it. I'm also curious, would Alis and Sean ever include a third? They seem blissful with one another and also maybe a little jealous. But that scene with Cara just made my mind wander and wonder I guess =}
Alis has been mellowing, so it's possible as long as it's reaaaal clear it's just a friendly thing. No strangers, no lovers. As for colors... maybe something like those dream illustrations in Floating Flowers...
Interesting.. I always figured Sean was somewhere on the ace/demi spectrum and so wouldn't be into a threesome either. On the other hand there was the boat scene where others played at least some role... π€
She won't go hunt them down, but she's pretty adventurous and accepting of her friends' strange interests.
Cara and her amazing technicolor dream hair!
It definitely makes her a guaranteed color sketch!