Bleach: Domination of The Dark One Ch. 6 - Loly's Submission part 2



For a while, Loly thought that her broken arms made her defenseless. But now that both of them were fully healed and functional again, she was forced to realize that she remained just as vulnerable as before. Standing naked and shaking, in front of the man she was trying to kill. 

To make things even worse, he looked unnervingly casual about it, like he didn't even pay much attention. Loly was well aware of the unique thrill that comes from messing with those weaker than you, she sometimes did that herself, but something about him was different.

He was looking around, searching for something.

"Follow me." - He said, as he set off in one direction. Menoly followed him from a safe distance, while Loly stood silently, pondering what to do. He wasn't even paying any attention, this would be the perfect time to run away. Still, she had a deep fear about that. For some reason, she couldn't bring herself to escape, something inside her felt like she'd not survive for long if she tried to. 

The only thing that felt like an even remotely safe option, was to follow. She grabbed her clothes from the ground, and quickly put them back on, then followed them from a distance. 

The man lead them to a large vertically shaped rock, not far from where they were. Once he arrived, he looked back at the girls. Menoly followed him from a small distance, while Loly stayed much further.

"Hurry up." - He said. He was calm and relaxed, but was somehow commanding at the same time.

Loly caught up, but didn't get too close.

"I did not say you can dress back up." - He told Loly, who instantly began shaking. She silently began undressing. For some reason, doing it herself felt even more humiliating than before, when Menoly did it for her.

Once she was naked again, he continued. - "Get in front of the rock." - He told her. And she did so. - "Lean forward, hand to the rock." - Loly was hesitant, but followed his order. She was starting to have a really bad feeling about this.

"Menoly." - He turned to the other girl. - "You will be the one to punish her for her previous behavior."

"...B-But you already..." - Loly began to complain.

"Silence." - He cut her off firmly. She immediately went silent as a shiver ran through her body.

He went back to talking to Menoly. - "I want you to spank her."

Menoly's face went red. She was caught off guard by his order, and was clearly uncomfortable about the idea, but she was too intimidated to question him. She silently nodded and walked up to Loly.

"Also..." - He said. - "What's your name again? I think you have mentioned it before, but I don't seem to recall."

"..." - Loly assumed that he was talking to her. - "...I-It's Loly... Loly Aivirrne."

"Got it." - He said. - "Now... I want you to count while she spanks you. And Menoly... Don't hold back. We will repeat if it's too weak."

Both girls remained silent, still questioning whether this was really happening.

"You can start whenever you feel like it." - He told Menoly. But she just couldn't bring herself to do it.

Loly was getting impatient, and spoke to Menoly quietly in a defeated tone. - "...Just hurry up and do it already...Let's get this over with as quickly as possible." - She seemed to have given up.

"...Then...S-Sorry about this..." - Menoly said as she raised a hand and landed a medium-strength blow to Loly's bottom.

"...One." - Loly started counting quietly, utterly ashamed of having to do it.

"Put more strength into it..." - He said. - "...We're not counting this one."

Menoly was already deeply uncomfortable even just doing this much.

"...Do it properly." - Loly told her. - "I don't care... just make this end fast."

Menoly was hesitant, but also knew deep down that she was just making things worse by holding back. She raised her hand again, and smacked her ass with as much power as she could muster up. This was a truly powerful blow, which made Loly's entire body flinch from the impact. Loly gasped deeply, then started counting again. - "...One." - Her voice was a bit more emotional this time, not nearly as calm and unaffected as last time.

"Again." - He said. - "...This is still too weak."

Menoly didn't know what to do, she was sure this would be overkill already. - "...I...I'm sorry, but... t-that's the strongest I can go..." - She said with a shaking voice.
 
"Is this the extent of your power?" - He asked.

Menoly silently nodded.

The man started approaching her, which made her start shaking. - "I'm not impressed..." - He said. - "...but I won't blame you for your lack of power. Give me your hand."

Menoly extended her shaking hand towards him, which he grabbed with his own. Suddenly, an overwhelming power entered her body, coming from him. It quickly traveled through her body, merging with her own power. This energy felt darker and stronger than anything she had ever felt before, and was slowly making her own inner energy conform to it.

He let go of her and went back to where he was watching from before. - "Try it now." - He said.

Menoly was somewhat intimidated by this power, afraid she couldn't even handle it, she felt overwhelmed. Still, she knew she had to get it together to finally end this. She raised her hand again, but this time, there was something different about it. This dark energy gathered around her hand on its own, like it had a will of its own, separate from hers.

She launched her hand. The impact was soo powerful, that it sent a small wave of energy through the air, it almost felt like she just shot a cero. Loly shrieked loudly as the dark energy ran through her body like electricity. She could barely keep her stance. If she wasn't leaning against the rock to stabilize herself she would have fully fallen to the ground. Even after the worst part of the impact was over, her entire body was tingling from the aftereffects.

After a bit of silence, the man spoke up. - "I didn't hear the counting, we're repeating this one as well."

"Wait!..." - Loly shouted desperately. - "...O-One." - She said a bit more quietly.

"I have already decided that we're redoing it. You can make up for it with the next one."

Loly silently cursed him while biting her lips, but didn't dare to talk back. She started shaking a bit, as she braced herself for the next blow, still feeling the tingling sensation left by the previous one. And soon enough, she felt another strong impact on her ass. The anticipation made it even worse this time, as her entire attention was focused on it. She could barely hold her pose, her lower body felt tense and numb at the same time. She mustered up her will to speak. - "...One!" - She said loudly.

She was anxiously waiting for the next strike to come, and it did arrive. Once again she had to fight the intensity of her sensations to concentrate on counting. - "...T-Two!"

Loly solely focused on somehow getting through them one by one. Her bottom was burning more and more with each blow, and the tingling aftereffects were intensifying as well. Her counting gradually became more and more desperate as her willpower was slowly fading away. She didn't even know how long he would make her endure this. After every strike, she was desperately hoping for this to finally end, but he just remained silent after each one, right until she reached the 20th.

"...T-Twenty!" - She said with a weak, defeated voice.

"I think that's enough for now." - He said casually.

"...T-Thank you!" - Loly said loudly in relief.

He slowly walked up to her. Loly kept her original position, still leaning against the rock, and pushing out her bottom. She felt too numb and overwhelmed to straighten herself and stand properly. She slowly turned her head to the side, to look at the man who was already standing next to her. She was worried he might do something to her if she didn't pay attention.

"Loly." - He addressed her.

"...Y-Yes?" - She asked with a shaking voice.

"Are you dedicated enough to serve me?"

She knew there was only one answer that could end her misery. - "...Y-Yes!" - She replied desperately.

"Then kneel before me."

She knew she couldn't defy him, and slowly squatted down using the rock beside her to keep her balance. She very carefully sat down on her knees. Her ass was overly sensitive from the previous assault, which made it really uncomfortable and painful for her to sit down, which was clearly visible on her expression as well.

The man in front of her was still naked. His limp member was directly in front of her face, and he stepped even closer.

"This is your opportunity to prove your loyalty."

Loly wasn't sure what was about to happen, but she found it hard to imagine anything worse or more humiliating than what she'd already gone through.