Stay - Ch 20 - Pages 15-16

I really struggled on the dialogue here - how do you tell a character something the audience already knows?? Hopefully it's not too exposition-y

Also! 100% I do "parallel" scenes throughout the story on purpose - I hope people catch them and have a fun little: "OHHH HOOO, HOW THE TURNS TABLE!"

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