Charlie and the Diaper Factory 1-4 REVISED

Hi all! I happened to be reading my story aloud to a friend and I realized it had a whole lot of errors! I went ahead and revised chapters 1-4, and I'll be revising 5-8 shortly. Please enjoy this update! I've made it public since the story was already released long ago! 

Charlie D. Pail loves diapers, but the fabulous life of the famous and diapered seems worlds away - that is until he finds a golden ticket. Soon, he is swept away on a grand factory tour with World-Renowned diaper mogul, Mr. Willy Waddler. Who knows what soggy surprises are in store?