Scene 1 – Narrative Rework 


Hello everyone!
As the project evolved, the writing style reached a new level — smoother dialogue, cleaner emotional flow, stronger narration, and better bubble formatting. Because of that, I decided to go back and rework all earlier scenes, starting with Scene 1.
Scene 1 has now been fully rewritten with:
• refined dialogues
• polished narration
• improved emotional rhythm
• consistent character tone
• updated bubble layout
In the next weeks, I will continue to rework all scenes prior to Scene 7, ensuring they match the current quality.
This may also include adding new renders in some places to make the story more fluid and cinematic.
The reworked versions will be exclusive to subscribers.
— Julien