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Illustrated by Honi_Do
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THE RULES (TL;DR)
- Keep Krystal safe to reach the true ending
- She loses clothes when danger hits (or votes are between 34% to 65%) Not yet
- Naked + wrong vote = Game Over
- Only one try — no retries
True Ending =
• Reunite with Fox (“Good Bye Star Fox” ending from Star Fox Command, the Marcus ending)
• The meaning behind the “A” in LOKA is revealed
• We’ll try to adapt the ending into a short 2D animation with voice acting
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LOG ENTRY — Krystal... Day... I'm not sure anymore...
Drifting. That’s all I’ve been doing these past weeks.
The Aparoid war’s over, but nothing feels right.
It changed Fox. Maybe all of us.
He used to trust me, fight alongside me without hesitation.
But during the final assault, when we almost didn’t make it back… something in him broke.
He couldn’t bear the thought of losing me.
Or anyone else he cared about.
So he cut me loose.
He never asked if I wanted that. He made his choice, and I respected it.
Maybe I even understood it. But that doesn’t mean I agree.
And it doesn’t mean I’m okay.
It changed Fox. Maybe all of us.
He used to trust me, fight alongside me without hesitation.
But during the final assault, when we almost didn’t make it back… something in him broke.
He couldn’t bear the thought of losing me.
Or anyone else he cared about.
So he cut me loose.
He never asked if I wanted that. He made his choice, and I respected it.
Maybe I even understood it. But that doesn’t mean I agree.
And it doesn’t mean I’m okay.
I’ve been on my own ever since. Aimless.
Moving from station to station like a ghost with no grave.
Sometimes, I try to meditate... but my mind wanders.
It lands on faces I miss.
Moving from station to station like a ghost with no grave.
Sometimes, I try to meditate... but my mind wanders.
It lands on faces I miss.
Kyte.
She might still be on Sauria, pulling together what’s left of her tribe.
Assuming she’s still alive.
We haven’t spoken since I left to investigate that distress signal inside the Krazoa Palace.
But if there’s still a place in the galaxy that feels like home… Maybe it’s with her.
She might still be on Sauria, pulling together what’s left of her tribe.
Assuming she’s still alive.
We haven’t spoken since I left to investigate that distress signal inside the Krazoa Palace.
But if there’s still a place in the galaxy that feels like home… Maybe it’s with her.
Or… I could try something new.
I got a message from Panther.
Same routine. Sweet talk and bravado. That smirk of his even comes through text. He’s ridiculous. I never took him seriously.
I got a message from Panther.
Same routine. Sweet talk and bravado. That smirk of his even comes through text. He’s ridiculous. I never took him seriously.
Maybe I should.
Maybe a new team, a new rhythm… even a new mask is what I need.
Maybe a new team, a new rhythm… even a new mask is what I need.
So maybe it’s time I decide to...
A. Visit Kyte on Dinosaur Planet.
B. Join Panther and Star Wolf.
B. Join Panther and Star Wolf.
Sounds like a fun democratically choose your own adventure, my only gripe is that it works kinda like most porn platformer games where you get rewarded with a sex scene if you lose rather than sex scenes being a reward for success.
The furry porn game Kincaid started off where losing was how you saw the sex scenes, you would have to go up to an enemy, and let them beat you up until you were on the ground, then they would try to fuck you and you could either resist and get another chance at beating them, or let them beat you and you'd get sex scene. Thankfully they fixed a couple years ago, now you can beat up enemies, and if there are no other live enemies on the screen, you can ask them if they want to fuck and you get your sex scene.
That's actually a gamedesign I really don't like, where sex goes against the flow of the gameplay, either by needing the player to loose, which is counterintuitive, even frustrating, or to break the pacing by pausing the game every new character "just because you're curious to see the scene". I don't think it's rewarding at all, nor feels natural.
I'm more into games where sex is simply another tool that allows the player to solve situations. Therefore, it becomes even more rewarding as the sex feels more like a natural part of the gameplay. For example, it can be a way for the protagonist to get a better relationship with a NPC, allowing access to new stuff/stories.
Can't say it'd be the case for LOKA, as the situation is very different. Thus why the rule is that if she's get caught naked, it's automatic game over with no retry. Consequences are therefore more real.
I mean fair, integrating the sex as a requirement for the gameplay is certainly better, but it also better to have sex as a reward than as a loss. Also if those scenes are optional that doesn't break the flow.