There was a lot of constructive feedback to the previous post, so I wanted to share an update with a new version that addresses some of that feedback.  I think this version does a better job of adding detail without being too distracting.  No poll on this one, as I think the general vibe was that enough people were open to the concept, they just had justifiable concerns about the details of the implementation, which I appreciate.

As I was working out the panels for the Little Piggies comic, I started to get a feeling I've had before where the story beats are super intense in my head, but when they get translated into panels and dialogue, they start to lose some of the heat and emotional intensity that comes across often in good erotic stories.

As an example, an intense description of a women being driven to a reluctant orgasm against her will often has a much stronger emotional impact than a speech bubble saying "Oh god I'm gonna cum", even when it's paired with a sexy image.

So I started thinking if there might be a way to bridge that gap and get the best of both worlds. I think my experiment with Dirty Priest went too far in the other direction, there wasn't enough art to have the story flow even with more descriptive text.  But as I thought about it more, I realized maybe a little bit of text with each panel could to deliver that extra emotional impact without distracting from the art and story flow.

I came up with a few initial rules for this style:
- No change in the number of panels, still 2-5 and averaging 3-4.
- Important speech bubbles and sound fx are still included.
- Thought bubbles are mostly removed, important thoughts are moved into the descriptions of the characters emotions. Some might still be used sparingly for plot reasons. 
- A lot of filler text bubbles and sound effects can be removed if they aren't key moments.
- Reduced page gutter width so there is more space for art/text. 
- Remove a lot of filler panels in favor of scene transition descriptions so the focus can be more on key moments and adding more and longer scenes.
- Less angles in panel layouts.  I've been using less angles anyway recently, but panels will be mostly be kept rectangular except for specific situations. I might experiment more with this aspect specifically.

Regarding filler panels, in the previous style, many times panels were added to show step by step action.  For example, in the scene below, in the original page Lucas pulls out the vibrator, tells her to open her mouth, then puts the vibrator in her mouth across 3 panels. In the new one, he pulls it out, and puts in her mouth in 2 panels, and the text describes how she was so overwhelmed that she willingly starting sucking it.  This allows pages to focus on more hero moments and fit longer and more scenes into the comic. 

I think this could be a really good way to improve the comics and especially to introduce a lot more lurid detail about the characters and their emotions and actions, which is especially important for the story in Little Piggies.  For Little Piggies specifically it might mean being able to add several more scenes and many more contraptions and torments. 

BUT I don't want to just launch a new format like this with a story that people voted for if people don't end up liking it as much. So the examples below will helpfully give a good demonstration of what I'll be trying to do, and please let me know your feedback. If you think it looks promising and you'd be excited about it, or if it would make you rethink buying the comic because you would rather see the old style.  

If you skipped all the boring text, vote for how you feel about the revised pages below from Blackmailed Teacher 1 with the black text boxes vs the original versions.    

While things are still open to change, I wanted to share some details about the characters in Little Piggies and hint at some potential angles for the story to explore.  

Group Project has finished running and the complete comic been added to the archive.  While I have some loose ideas for two more chapters, I probably won't revisit it unless there is a big demand for it since there a bunch of other ideas I want to work on.  

For the next comic, the Little Piggies comic idea won overwhelmingly, so I'll be working hard to get it ready for next month starting from scratch. I have a rough outline for the story, which leans heavily on merciless sexual torment of the piggies in various extreme contraptions.  I think there will be a bit of an erotic horror aspect to it given how hopeless the captive cops situations are and how strict their bondage will be, but I'll still be focusing on making sure the women look alluring while enduring repeated forced orgasms.

I'll be juggling Little Piggies and KSB5 until KSB5 is complete, after which I can fully focus on Little Piggies. I made good progress on KSB5 last month and it is roughly 66% complete. A big focus last month was working on the hot tub scene seen below.  I've always been a big fan of how slutty this swimsuit style looks and thought it was a good fit for this scene.